IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (26.09) (IDP)

Topic: As life expectancy is increasing, people work after retirement with pay. Alternatively, some people start to work at a young age. Are these positive or negative impacts?

Outline:          

Work after retirement

Positive impact

  1. Provides happiness and purpose
  2. Physically and mentally healthy
  3. Savings aren’t substantial

Negative side: can’t apply full-time due to health constraint – younger workforce is likely to overwhelm

Work at a young age

Positive impact

  1. Gain first-hand experience
  2. Make life more affordable
  3. Build up connection

Negative side: money obsession => lack of focus on education/ income might not be stable.

Conclusion: no matter at what age you are, working is of fundamental importance to people. It’s up to their own choice to maintain balance both sides of working.

Võ Minh Sử – Chủ sáng lập Homeschooling English Center