international travel has many advantages

IELTS WRITING TASK 2 TOPIC 3.12 -IDP:

International travel has many advantages to both travellers and the country visited. Ads outweigh disads?

Outline:

Advantages:

  • To travelers:
    • International travel helps tourists broaden the horizons by learning different cultures and languages.
    • Visitors can make new friends on their journeys.
  • To the country visited
    • Global tourism also stimulate the economy’s growth. (Tourists are willing to allocate a part of their incomes for services on holidays. That sum of money can be used to invest on education, infrastructure, ….).
    • Tourism also creates more job opportunities to the communities. (manufacturing, food growing, hotel services,…)
    • International travel contributes to the restoration of historical monuments and preservation of local communities. (Governments make efforts to maintain these places for tourists to visit)

Disadvantages

  • To travellers:
    • Tourist are more vulnerable to exotic illnesses. (European citizens often find food poisoning strange a treat when travelling to developing countries.)
    • Visitors can become victims of criminal acts such as kidnapping, snatching,…
  • To the country visited
    • Tourists often play a part in damaging the environment. (such as littering, spitting, …)
    • Local traditions are more vulnerable when being exposed to exotic cultures. (Children no longer play outsides but stick their eyes on the screen.)
    • There is an upward trend in seasonal jobs, causing instability to the health of the economy. (There are more unemployed people after the tourist season.)

Trên đây là dàn ý chi tiết tham khảo cho topic “international travel has many advantages”, các bạn hãy viết bài và comment vào bên dưới để được sửa bài viết nhé.

Các bạn có thể tham khảo dàn ý chi tiết đề thi ngày 26.11 tai đây.

Võ Minh Sử – Chủ sáng lập Homeschooling English Center